2k u really need to work on coherence bro. Stick to some basic rhyme schemes and actually rhyme from line to line.... think about an instant in time and describe it. If youre going to battle u need to brain storm about what you will be writing about and stick to it.
Mvgt Vivid, your piece was ill bro. Did a great job telling your story, flow was fresh. I definitely think this is some real life shit from you. Thats dope you can bring it real like that.. I enjoyed this piece and appreciate you took the time for a full drop. My bad vote is weak bro im on my tablet right now.
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