marshal mathers limited platinum, you are really good at these type of verses. at your best id say. starting with the disguised image and work your way into the deeper meaning as the verse transgresses. a really natural twist, your rhymes were very balanced, just an overall polished verse. good stuff!
ydk, a verse that contrasted your opponents completely, where his was defined in framework from the onset, yours never really gathered to the point of moving in a direction. you had some cool lines in there, i liked the wording an imagery in the line as a pulse bit. i feel you tried to tie it in with the last few lines but it didn't cater to the topic as much as it could have
+1 MMLP
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