Wavy - Started off somewhat slow and just got better after the fifth line. Not that the last four bad as I did like the mech warrior line, I'm just sayin'. Killer Instinct was the shit, dope reference. I feel like this could have been worded better: ''breakin whatever's inside ya chest up''. Beside of that line I enjoyed the read for the most part. Some dope shit there and the closure was nice. Dope shit.
$chein - Cool opener, got dragged into it pretty fast and read through it well. I think I personally enjoyed this line the most: ''My suite got lamb skin curtains designed by my man Tim Burton w/ the tan trim flirtin'', it was a crazy/absurd visual you gave me and I enjoyed the rhymescheme. The last four lines were on point as well.
Vote - It's hard to pick a winner because I felt both came with it and it's close. But I ended up with $chein Dolla $ign on this one. Wave's got a lot of dope shit but felt $chein edged it with the xbox, tim burton, candy whip and the rest towards the end over waves Killer Instinct, pentium and coasts of bali line, some shit also flew over my head and had no impact to me like the Ted DiBiase-line tho' but I ain't in the mood to google even though I usually do, sorry about that. Dope battle.
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Last edited by Objective; 11-20-2015 at 08:52 PM.
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