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Old 11-20-2015, 04:45 PM   #7
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sigh.

Who was Vivid supposed to battle?


The story was cool in Vivid's verse, probably the only thing I really liked about it. As far as the rhyming, mechanics, I wasn't too impressed to be honest.

2K, what were you thinking? A lot of shit didn't rhyme. Some shit was even hard to read because it just didn't make sense grammatically. I dunno.. pretty easy vote for me here

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