I really liked a lot about this. The flow definitely works with the beat and your delivery is solid. I loved almost everything about the beat too except the snare sound on the drums sounds really bad to me for some reason. But, other than that, I thought it built really well. Kinda torn on the lyrics. Too many slant rhymes in my opinion. Also I feel like the lyrics were meant to be kinda heartfelt but I had trouble picking enough of the out to really connect. I'll probably listen to it again though so that's gotta count for something I guess.
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