11-14-2015, 08:32 PM
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#8
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Crack Morris
Join Date: Sep 2015
Posts: 330
Battle Record: 6-1
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Originally Posted by Destroyer
some say Lyrs, some say Kami, either way, he's leaving severely scarred
if u ask me, I just think ur Beyond... anyone giving a fuck who u really are
This was average to me.. the "Beyond ____" lines have been used a lot in recent years
ur basically hurricane Patricia when it comes to ur text prowess fool
made waves at the beginning, but now no one talks about this dude
Solid punch, relevant because it's current & worded well
i'll twist ur arm around ur back cux des is someone u know u can't handle
& hold it there til u'll be saying 'uncle' Jun, like the return of tony soprano
I like the concept, but think it could've been worded to hit way harder.. still, not bad by any means
be honest chump, we throw hands & u leaving w/ a lot of lumps
I'll beat his whole head till its swollen & red... I call that the donald trump
Again, could've added some complexity to this to make it land more effectively.. it's humorous, so I fuck w/ it
I hate aliases... that's why I won't stop until this fake is dead
watch me wipe my ass w/ u & add ur name to Hush's toilet paper thread
Nice closer, not much to say about this one; crisp punch & delivery
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Originally Posted by Junto
look...
nah I'm not still stuck on that, I just wanna explain for you so chill chump...
'Dun' is what ya shoulda been wit text battles when you turned 40 & STILL sucked
Wording made this hit harder than it probably should have.. not overly complex, but still a sharp opener
you got the swag of a chia pet stylist - I’m out fuckin models wit the curvy waists
On weekends I pop somethin & roll somethin. You do that walking at a hurried pace.
LOTB so far
chop u up at ur own crib while ur hoe is gone - legs in the bed, torso on the sofa dog
...she'll come home & see ya eyes glued to the fuckin TV like ur favorite show was on
Wasn't really feeling this; it seemed telegraphed.. the bar from a technical standpoint is good, though
Fuck ur sway threads fuck ur Bags votes, Fuck hidin like a bitch doin ur 'tag roasts'
U was gon get beat... Now u can catch these bullets I pitch perfect 2 like I sang notes
Meh.. not a miss, but just seemed rushed or uninspired
Gun under each pillow at night cuz I might have to blast for my life man
if you takin your choppers out it's to put them into a glass on the nightstand
I think you meant "chompers" here, as in dentures/false teeth.. I've never heard them called "choppers," so maybe I'm doing you a disservice lol.. but I've seen this concept used by others, specifically Beyond, on Des before.. it didn't land for me
you old bitch
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So this was a lot closer than I was expecting to see.. Des had a solid verse, nothing overdone or really earth-shattering, but direct & worded well for the most part.. Junto had LOTB w/ that "hurried pace" bar & definitely had a more sound verse as far as mechanics go.. I'm kinda torn, because I think Destroyer slightly out-punched him here, but Junto took every other category; Idk, I'm giving it to Junto based on preference, but this really could go either way.. dope battle, fr
v/ Junto
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