lmao asylum that topic choice. he wrote about starcraft you non-nerd tryhard fgts. he was a terran badass slaying some master race zerg beta non microing potatoes. i thought the first quarter of the verse was really hard to get into, having some hints towards the true content earlier on would have been very useful.
godcomp, had a couple nice sections, the description of the heard dying was kinda call. intro and last stanza were well written but were hard to get into content wise, and that was the deciding factor this week
both writers had sections that read dry but one had slightly less then the others this go around
+1 Asylum
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