Netcees - View Single Post - AOWL #1 CONTENDER MATCH: Vulgar (3-0) VS. ZeeDee (4-2) [ZEEDEE WINS, 6-2.]

IamBenT · 05-06-2013, 09:51 AM

GREAT BATTLE!! EASILY BOTW

oK QUOTEs first.

Zeedee

My faith as a Mormon has elevated my fortress to crazy proportions
I've made an enormous family unit with no escapes or abortions
Salt Lake City: storage for wives and Utah advocates this assortment
With low rates in divorces; they're ready for marriage and a place to enforce this

Great intro here, really sets up the story for ensuing drama and conflict,smooth

That's where Rose met Julie, exposed her to me and approached her smoothly
A lonely cutie we invited for supper and a holy movie

- expert level rhyming here, effortless and fun and great flow, this is
just one example of SeVERAL lines like this.

It's openly cracked so I hold my attack to see what she's planned
An unbelievable scam: I'VE BEEN BETRAYED BY MY WIVES

- HAHA damn my dude, great twist here mid tale! the description after this
is great too

Vulgar

How delicious the tongue tastes must’ve been a sensual upgrade
Got head in a Hyundai, now I’m headed for Slump Straits
In debt cause of drug raids, a fucking professional muckrake

- great flow here throughout, not having seen a style switch up from you and its refreshing

Feel the stripes of gonorrhea on your fingers like Persian hide

- Just.. icky lol but well written

Murder She Drudged, 1-800-PURCHASE-A-VIRGIN-TO-FUCK
Earth is a learning excursion where burdens of trust turn into dust

-another example of killer flow.

Damn just an all around great battle on a killer topic, I love Zeedee's story, it was hilarious and kind of troubling at the same time, and you could see how his zealot narrator could take it to the next level and feel justified in killing his wife. Vulgar's verse was poetically amazing with great word choice and a god flow, both were on par at flow, Vulgar's story was really bold and left me wondering where the speaker had come and why (if any) was the reason he was doing what he was doing.

I feel that Vulgar did a better job of writing, but Zeedee told a better story, and since yall are fairly closely matched imo great stories always win me over.

Vote -Zeedee by a snatch's pube lol since yall were both on that sex tip.

05-06-2013, 09:51 AM	#13
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	GREAT BATTLE!! EASILY BOTW oK QUOTEs first. Zeedee My faith as a Mormon has elevated my fortress to crazy proportions I've made an enormous family unit with no escapes or abortions Salt Lake City: storage for wives and Utah advocates this assortment With low rates in divorces; they're ready for marriage and a place to enforce this Great intro here, really sets up the story for ensuing drama and conflict,smooth That's where Rose met Julie, exposed her to me and approached her smoothly A lonely cutie we invited for supper and a holy movie - expert level rhyming here, effortless and fun and great flow, this is just one example of SeVERAL lines like this. It's openly cracked so I hold my attack to see what she's planned An unbelievable scam: I'VE BEEN BETRAYED BY MY WIVES - HAHA damn my dude, great twist here mid tale! the description after this is great too Vulgar How delicious the tongue tastes must’ve been a sensual upgrade Got head in a Hyundai, now I’m headed for Slump Straits In debt cause of drug raids, a fucking professional muckrake - great flow here throughout, not having seen a style switch up from you and its refreshing Feel the stripes of gonorrhea on your fingers like Persian hide - Just.. icky lol but well written Murder She Drudged, 1-800-PURCHASE-A-VIRGIN-TO-FUCK Earth is a learning excursion where burdens of trust turn into dust -another example of killer flow. Damn just an all around great battle on a killer topic, I love Zeedee's story, it was hilarious and kind of troubling at the same time, and you could see how his zealot narrator could take it to the next level and feel justified in killing his wife. Vulgar's verse was poetically amazing with great word choice and a god flow, both were on par at flow, Vulgar's story was really bold and left me wondering where the speaker had come and why (if any) was the reason he was doing what he was doing. I feel that Vulgar did a better job of writing, but Zeedee told a better story, and since yall are fairly closely matched imo great stories always win me over. Vote -Zeedee by a snatch's pube lol since yall were both on that sex tip. __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon Last edited by IamBenT; 05-06-2013 at 09:55 AM.