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Old 11-13-2015, 10:46 AM   #6
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Let's see that lat spread; keep flexin 'til I pop this gun off
I'll get a Body billed when they're Pumping Iron into you jus to stop the blood loss
Glock or .380; it's GTL for Knux, then his family gon' cry
Fuckboy get any Tannehill be coming outta pocket worse than Miami's O Line
This tranny won't try gettin teste; my dick had ya wifey Crip walking
Netflix & Chill - she take down loads & couldn't stop the stream like we binge watching
I'll herring bone ya, get filet'd - the switchblade or the barrel on ya
Air the toaster, the heat from this K put ya teeth in your brain; that's a teratoma


I was feeling Wavy shit on first read, second read I noticed a lot of older ideas spruced up to look new. Pretty sure AK did the Tannehill shit at some point, the "Netflix and Chill" make be a current thing - but the downloads/down loads thing isnt. Feel me?

THAT FUCKING TERATOMA LINE THOUGH GAVE ME THE GAS FACE, DOPE AS FUCK!!!!!

Knux: You were pretty cool, not a great deal of hard hitting shit in truth to me, a lot was too wordy and killed my enjoyment or you telegraphed the line coming by capitalising (not-so) key points. The wave/washup/tide line was semi-cool but didnt hit at all, felt a little flat. Departs should have been scrapped along with defeat bars IMO. I disliked it.

Not to be a dick, both guys are cool, I just wasnt feeling a great lot.

Neigh's teratoma bar took it.
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