I think its fair to keep this brief.. a real end of season match up here
Tim - hard to really know what was going on in ur verse, a crash caused by texting? I didn’t really know what the ending was supposed to say/ represent, maybe it’s a subliminal and im having a blond moment but the ending could have been cleared up to finish the scene you created, that’s my only real criticism for relatively short piece
J’s flow and delivery of the topic was much smoother, ‘sippin a sprite’ lolololol loved it!
Nice take on a topic and executed really well. I have to consider you top tier becuz this come across seemingly effortless tbh (keyed). Good little read here.
v/ Mr J this time
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