Mr. J - This is one of the better flowin' pieces I've read from you, multies are nice with it...content is straight...Its short & sweet, couldn't ask for much else.
timeless - your multies are off @ times which makes places odd when readin' for me...length hurts things also...some of what's here be ok but there's just too little of it & what is served up isn't really to my taste so yeah.
Vote - Mary Jane.
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