Asy - this was alright, flow was choppy, rhymes were good. U stuck with the story throughout, i like your interpretation of the quote(topic). the idea of a man/ alien potentially overseeing his true love's death was cool and in an intergalactic... universe as well LOL. Good job!
Law - this is good as well. "brutal and vicious. So gruesome and wicked" was dope then noodles in minutes hahahaha, same level as Asy from a technical standpoint. The piece come together nicely at the end. Im STILL relatively new and i know that concept wasnt innovative but it was twist that i just didnt click onto til i read the end so u got me there.
Your both contenders for a reason, Quality match up. This was a close call in truth and my vote is based on only one reason. How satisfied the ending left me.
Law wins based solely on that
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