Copypat - haha this was a cool verse. I took it as a quite humorous approach to the topic and you did a great job progression through it. However, it wasn't the most unique or craziest of approaches but taking the relevant word usage and making it fit into the rhyme scheme and flow so well is what made this piece. Overall, you chose a direction, and it was solid with great writing.
Jeso - This was a decent take but the verse itself seemed a bit scattered to me. Didn't pick up a smooth flow right from the beginning, that started picking up as I continued reading. I thought you had some decent lines in there though. The questions worked well with the piece. Really isn't much else to say, I thought this piece could have used a bit more depth and consistency towards approach. It lacked a completeness in my eyes.
MVGT: Copypat - Not the craziest of battles here. Copypat just took his approach on the topic and worked with it well. Had good word usage and solid flow. Made it work altogether.
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