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CopyPat · 11-06-2015, 01:39 AM

oh fuck off...
this is way too close. fack.
first read over i had timeless. second reread i have mmlp..idunno
obviously you could tell what timeless was doing in his verse and i thought the idea was really good. his mom's life so drastically affecting his cause obv baby. fuckin really good idea on this topic. i give real props to that. the wriitng was solid. nothing really TOO crazy mechanically but well done for sure

mmlp i was pretty underwhelmed with ur verse at first, and i didn't get the weird references with lasers and prisms and i was liek wtf u talkin bout willis? but then yeah predator. re-read. brought that shit TO LYFE, g. again really cool interpretation of the topic. flow was good. ppl are saying the flow was simple but theyre fucka idiots ur flowing the whole line a lot of the time so yeah RESPEK.

goddamnit i literally still don't know who im voting for.. this shit is so close.
hmmm, *scanning records. who need the win more?? jk, but srsly...ummmm
k i have decided
Vote: Deadman
he usually wins
k i actually got it. i liked both ideas a lot. good job. writing wise very very close as well. content wise. i have to say i enjoyed mmlp's more after re-reading and knowing it was predator it was a really cool interesting and fresh original piece. the end of urs timeless was maybe a tad too weird. wasn't really feeling the tail part. and ur line before about something with safety didnt really make sense to me and was a bit of a force to make ur last line rhyme. yes nitpicking but when this close i gotta point out something. also earlier u ur verse u coulda rhymed get into trouble but u just said get in trouble and u needed that tiny extra syllable to make it flow perfectly. for some reason that litle bullshit is sticking out to me too. sorry, normally would never bring that up but this shit is literally like 51-49 for mmlp

Good battle guys. enjoyed this one. too bad someone had to lose. also thanks for making ur shit interesting AND short. fuckin perfect. awesome

Vote MMLP by a cunt hair. mostly down to i simply enjoyed the read a little bit more.
Good show.

11-06-2015, 01:39 AM	#13
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	oh fuck off... this is way too close. fack. first read over i had timeless. second reread i have mmlp..idunno obviously you could tell what timeless was doing in his verse and i thought the idea was really good. his mom's life so drastically affecting his cause obv baby. fuckin really good idea on this topic. i give real props to that. the wriitng was solid. nothing really TOO crazy mechanically but well done for sure mmlp i was pretty underwhelmed with ur verse at first, and i didn't get the weird references with lasers and prisms and i was liek wtf u talkin bout willis? but then yeah predator. re-read. brought that shit TO LYFE, g. again really cool interpretation of the topic. flow was good. ppl are saying the flow was simple but theyre fucka idiots ur flowing the whole line a lot of the time so yeah RESPEK. goddamnit i literally still don't know who im voting for.. this shit is so close. hmmm, *scanning records. who need the win more?? jk, but srsly...ummmm k i have decided Vote: Deadman he usually wins k i actually got it. i liked both ideas a lot. good job. writing wise very very close as well. content wise. i have to say i enjoyed mmlp's more after re-reading and knowing it was predator it was a really cool interesting and fresh original piece. the end of urs timeless was maybe a tad too weird. wasn't really feeling the tail part. and ur line before about something with safety didnt really make sense to me and was a bit of a force to make ur last line rhyme. yes nitpicking but when this close i gotta point out something. also earlier u ur verse u coulda rhymed get into trouble but u just said get in trouble and u needed that tiny extra syllable to make it flow perfectly. for some reason that litle bullshit is sticking out to me too. sorry, normally would never bring that up but this shit is literally like 51-49 for mmlp Good battle guys. enjoyed this one. too bad someone had to lose. also thanks for making ur shit interesting AND short. fuckin perfect. awesome Vote MMLP by a cunt hair. mostly down to i simply enjoyed the read a little bit more. Good show. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.