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e11even · 11-05-2015, 10:51 PM

copypat- this was probably a true story, so I won't poke too much fun. this was sort of tongue-in-cheek, as in you didn't take yourself too seriously in sharing your anecdote. The flow was classic you (solid) and I'm sure most people could at lease partially relate. I liked this.

jesodist- this was ok. I liked how varied and authentic the questions were. as stupid humans we do this often, pondering the meaning of life and the things we do to live it. This also seemed like an invitation into your insecurities and privacy, which is refreshing. Your rhyming seemed a little sharper than your counterpart and provided for shared introspection. this was more than just ok. I liked it. good job.

I liked both of these pieces but one cme across better for me. MVGT jesodist.

11-05-2015, 10:51 PM	#5
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	copypat- this was probably a true story, so I won't poke too much fun. this was sort of tongue-in-cheek, as in you didn't take yourself too seriously in sharing your anecdote. The flow was classic you (solid) and I'm sure most people could at lease partially relate. I liked this. jesodist- this was ok. I liked how varied and authentic the questions were. as stupid humans we do this often, pondering the meaning of life and the things we do to live it. This also seemed like an invitation into your insecurities and privacy, which is refreshing. Your rhyming seemed a little sharper than your counterpart and provided for shared introspection. this was more than just ok. I liked it. good job. I liked both of these pieces but one cme across better for me. MVGT jesodist. __________________ Ahem.