godcomp, enjoyed the spiritual aspect of the verse. you are one to weave in very interested terminology and references naturally into your work. especially taking the topic into consideration i really enjoyed your 'strong minded is completeness' angle. solid verse
J, at the very most this was interesting insight to your writing process. what you had definitely required more comparisons and direction to be properly cohesive with the topic but it was a valiant attempt to get something down
+1 godcomp
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