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Old 11-05-2015, 05:30 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by Chamber View Post
it goes...

i get violent when im drunk off dark liq...fist'll cave ya cage,
that henna make me put marks on ur body that'll take days to fade away.
--idk. the connections here dont seem strong enough for me here. miss for me.
got grenade launchers an blades...im armed wit heat,
stab ur chest till ya organs Fallout 4 times faster than hittin u wit a rpg.
--this is niiiiiiiiicccccceeee imo. the fall out wp was here as well as the rocket launcher/role playinig game acronym play. props on this.
im always down to brawl faggit...my fists has wreck lives,
you'd never scarp pussy, kimora big bitch than russel simmons ex-wife.
--wp was nice. concept was a bit straight forward. solid line
uzi wit the rubber grip...slut these slugs rockin ur center,
my guns are out of this world only thing k-pax is a pocket protector.
--is this a reference to the movie? because i havent seen it. sorry bro
if we meet its war wit swords...im pokin slut,
second i sense ur presences im shankin ur ribbon till ur side opens up.
--this is pretty forced.
death by execution wit knives an poppin a desi,
u can catch 1 from the trejo then i'll hack ur head off wit a machete.
--u could have tied the trey part of the trejo wp in better in ur set up but this was nice still

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Originally Posted by Kemizt View Post
Chemist taking this win with ease. Setting me up wit this loser? hes done, like Meth Ment this.
ill knock you out and bury you with the rest. Sooo ill gas chamber and set him up with a death sentence.
--this was stretched. try to shorten these bars. as far as the punch. gas chamber is kind of obvious. execution wasnt really there for me.
sticks n stones will break your bones, this fag boi's tent's up. these campers are hurt.
with my text game ill have this kid lost. Posted up on milk boxes and sent out on amber alerts.
--ehhh. this could have been cool but once again the executions just not there. connections are too loose, and the "my text game ill have this kid lost" was pretty week
ive read your shit. you come lame with basic lines that always end up short.
we'll have the whole NC crew in on your loss when this trial goes to court
--nah
When the cock dont come his way, this dudes left in anger... His weakness.
This aint wizardry shit. Hes wont come out, hes stuck in the closet, just a Chamber of secrets
--nah ive seen chamber of secrets plays on him in each of his last 3 battles. this one was too obvious
when they say one is in the chamber, you know its cocked and loaded
pistol to the head. eyes closed. just an image to his porno, this guy is coated.
--i like this
Im every bitches need and they crave me. I always catch them staring, k.
with my punches that land. Kem will leave you airborn higher than wearing J's
--this could have been cool its just execution is ur biggest problem my man. the angles u take are too obvious some times and it just leaves the readers disappointed. i dont mean that in a bad way cuz u got some potential


@Meth
@Chamber
this wasnt the best battle ever but i enjoyed reading it

fall out 4 was nice af from chamber. trejo line was nice as well.

both took some angles that could have been better. kem had some reall obvious flips and that hurt his verse. his connections were pretty loose a lot of times too. hes got potential tho.

cool read bros

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