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Old 11-04-2015, 08:23 PM   #8
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Vulgar shit weird an ullr shit was mad lengthy an I just wanted it to end honestly. Idk how to go on this.....ullr wrote a novel an vulgar barely wrote half a 16. I hated the wording on ullr shit ....tho I spose as an epic it was sposed to have that old timey Shakespearean vernacular....but I would've dug it more if he just went straight hood with it.....slang and all...then left the readers to pull out the allegory depicted. Watever it was ok. Vulgar shit could be considered minimalist maybe? I haven't obv followed any other weeks or poems so idk if this is his general steelo er wot....I kno he generally has a bit more to say in his topical an he needed an ext I'm guessing he was rushed for time an got lazy? Idk none of that really matters I spose. I got ullr here w a more entertaining piece overall

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