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Old 11-04-2015, 01:59 PM   #5
Seyance
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Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,059
Battle Record: 0-4

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- Open Mic HOF (2x)

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if you see me? avoid or people will see a void, inside your skull cause these canons will be deployed,
the theme of this scheme is my whole teams on roids, lay you out when I write like Sigmund Freud,

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Ima fuckin twisted individual thats quick to get rida you..then I'm scoopin ya chick, dork
Future looks grim, sport.. her faiths diminished shes draped in stitches, I'm raping bitches with lucifer's pitchfork
Wes Craven with the techs blazin.. you aint nuttin when the slugs pop, jerk
This thug'll drop first.. I'll polish my ruger & abolish guys future, the Columbine shooter on the juggernaut perk

good battle guys, nice showing from both. mike you definitely got the ability to write real nice bars, just need to up your consistency and take a bit more time in your choice of composition. highlighted bar was buttery smooth though nice shit. decent rhymes, just up ya wording man. little dissapointed with knux at first but once i caught the flow the middle section came out hard, need to clean up the transitions a bit e.g. ,dork ,jerk even if it works with the context of what your saying it just seems a slightly forced rhyme. the columbine scheme was the highlight and did enough to get the w.

Knux
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