[Seyance]

in the JanSport I keep the Makarov, but don't need a passport to mack a broad
glance in the mirror, check the waves, then check for babes, I'm David Hasselhoff

Vs

Ayo, I should be facin the hardest life imprisonment.. not a single thought inside my awful mind is innocent
Mail a video tape of me splittin ya frame, now ya daughter's eyes're witnessin the horrifyin incident - Gerard Butler in Law Abiding Citizen
Study the law of attraction & rearrange all of ya atoms usin quantum mechanics, I'm Dr. Manhattan
Still I walk w/ a cannon.. double pump; bundled up, it's a cold winter
Blade gripped, you catch a face lift then get thrown in a grave quick; that's Joan Rivers

Decent first round showing from both. Chyeah I've seen you write better before, had a real lack of concepts, seemed like loads of random shit thrown together to rhyme. I liked the flow on your closer, missed a syllable here and there which did chop your flow up a tad. Needs to be a bit more cohsive but defo some highlights. Manhattan came out swinging, your opener was sotb (scheme of the battle) knew you'd come with a lotta gunbars good references flow was dope in sections. the bits I highlighted were fire. Hatten was more polished and flexed harder, more impact in his schemes and concepts. Good flow, but lines long as shit.. Chyeah could've doubled his bars up and they'd of been a similar length, not sure where people stand on that. Also in this tourney are we not supposed to match line length with the first person who dropped? Hattan posted 17 lines, which was over the round limit. If that's cool.. i'd of posted a full 16, who wants to write/read a 10 line swag snippet.

Manhattan