Overall this is top notch, I will say the first part read much smoothly than the other two but the concept is so interesting, being in the perspective of a rapist/ murderer. Superbly descriptive in the first part as it was describing the brutality and the next two was basically a convo, it was coherent, rhyming and flow was largely on point, all in all, it was executed brilliantly.
Its inspired me to write..... maybe a random collab with the boss! @
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