Netcees - View Single Post - Round 2 - Knux vs. Infiltration

Swerve · 11-02-2015, 12:19 PM

I'm totin' Raphael's weapons pussy.. shit'll leave ya bloody lifeless
Have the siberian ya heart so deep ur body be left a cold husk like that russian taiga
- forced, I really tried to look it up for benefit of the doubt but its still psy-beer-ian
I'm always down to throw hands. roid sides turned u the feminine type
When knux ball up... its in fetal position, mood swings hit all time high estrogen spikes
- maybe? I mean...I'm not sure if ball up is supposed to be like "sack up" or as in "balling up your fists" but it doesn't really work cleanly. Still okay though.
Supplement timing is key to build muscle str8 up no cheesy old gimmicks..
After workouts if this prick miss glutamine it's scar tissue loss from needle pokes in it
- Eh, okay...funny imagery but the wording is a bit off.
Ya girl aint let u hit in ages, i took a dustpan to get her vagina prepared
We knocked boots together... before i stuck a foot in to make sure no spiders in there
- Heh, I liked this. I think you could have worded it even harder but this was good.
Inf hit targets in public from buildings camo'd down; dont have a doubt
i gotta trained eye... that pick vital parts out from the rest of the crowd like a talent scout
- ok, not bad but you tried to do too much here and it didnt come across clean. There really was no need for the vital parts section as I dont think I've ever heard of players called "vital parts".
returned to ignite ya text career? replaced meth but ya not deserving it..
We confuse knuck/knux... cuz ya'll stooges shouldnt be playin ya parts in this tournament
- not feeling

vs.

Ima murder this faggot.. when im done the clips'll be empty son
Basically ima do you like black mass and have your entire family attending one
- only ok
All ya shit is played.. I got the livest bars that leave most slaughtered
I post torture while all the concepts you flip flatline like coach saunders
- good flip, best one I've seen so far as it was clean.
This tourny lacks competition.. theres not 1 dude youre better than
Skill levels dropping & long as Infinite the downward spiral'll never end
- solid
Ura broke bum.. ur recent losses prove I'm smashin this fool
Its clear you aint 'rollin in doh' but ur tag run WAS fuckin laughable dude
- ehhhhh...probably not
I mean ya both looked suspect, ura fake in denial
Somethins just not sittin right.. and its you after gettin raped in the finals
- haha, I mean its quite simple but it was nice.
Witha switch im brutal, dont giva fuck what this guys bout'
I'll stab, twist it & watch your family feel for you after I gouge their eyes out
- the concept was quite short and really didnt even require the stab and twist part so it kind of lost something. still ok.

This is close as hell to me. I have 3 ok lines and 1 nice line from Inf and 2 nice lines and 3 ok lines from Knux. I guess I have the edge going to KNux here, but I could see it easily going either way. I had to break it down more than I usually do to pick a winner. Good stuff.

V/ Knux

11-02-2015, 12:19 PM	#13
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,874 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920327	I'm totin' Raphael's weapons pussy.. shit'll leave ya bloody lifeless Have the siberian ya heart so deep ur body be left a cold husk like that russian taiga - forced, I really tried to look it up for benefit of the doubt but its still psy-beer-ian I'm always down to throw hands. roid sides turned u the feminine type When knux ball up... its in fetal position, mood swings hit all time high estrogen spikes - maybe? I mean...I'm not sure if ball up is supposed to be like "sack up" or as in "balling up your fists" but it doesn't really work cleanly. Still okay though. Supplement timing is key to build muscle str8 up no cheesy old gimmicks.. After workouts if this prick miss glutamine it's scar tissue loss from needle pokes in it - Eh, okay...funny imagery but the wording is a bit off. Ya girl aint let u hit in ages, i took a dustpan to get her vagina prepared We knocked boots together... before i stuck a foot in to make sure no spiders in there - Heh, I liked this. I think you could have worded it even harder but this was good. Inf hit targets in public from buildings camo'd down; dont have a doubt i gotta trained eye... that pick vital parts out from the rest of the crowd like a talent scout - ok, not bad but you tried to do too much here and it didnt come across clean. There really was no need for the vital parts section as I dont think I've ever heard of players called "vital parts". returned to ignite ya text career? replaced meth but ya not deserving it.. We confuse knuck/knux... cuz ya'll stooges shouldnt be playin ya parts in this tournament - not feeling vs. Ima murder this faggot.. when im done the clips'll be empty son Basically ima do you like black mass and have your entire family attending one - only ok All ya shit is played.. I got the livest bars that leave most slaughtered I post torture while all the concepts you flip flatline like coach saunders - good flip, best one I've seen so far as it was clean. This tourny lacks competition.. theres not 1 dude youre better than Skill levels dropping & long as Infinite the downward spiral'll never end - solid Ura broke bum.. ur recent losses prove I'm smashin this fool Its clear you aint 'rollin in doh' but ur tag run WAS fuckin laughable dude - ehhhhh...probably not I mean ya both looked suspect, ura fake in denial Somethins just not sittin right.. and its you after gettin raped in the finals - haha, I mean its quite simple but it was nice. Witha switch im brutal, dont giva fuck what this guys bout' I'll stab, twist it & watch your family feel for you after I gouge their eyes out - the concept was quite short and really didnt even require the stab and twist part so it kind of lost something. still ok. This is close as hell to me. I have 3 ok lines and 1 nice line from Inf and 2 nice lines and 3 ok lines from Knux. I guess I have the edge going to KNux here, but I could see it easily going either way. I had to break it down more than I usually do to pick a winner. Good stuff. V/ Knux __________________ No Cap Gang.