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Originally Posted by Untold
Throw the flag in faggot! Show ya White Stripes cuz ya counterfeit
Cuz the next thing ABC's is a Death Letter minus the fuckin alphabet
What you were going for is good, but it turned out badly. If he sees a death letter minus the alphabet it'd be a blank page, so it doesn't really work. the ABC/alphabet connection is good though.
Skills? I'm doubtin it. Now I'm guttin this counterfeit
So the next letter ABC's will be RIP a tombstone minus the alphabet
Again, doesn't really make much sense. It'd be a blank tombstone haha. I would try to steer away from the "minus the alphabet" bit and work a different angle with the alphabet connection.
Dunno which to use. I'm over thinking it prolly
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Keep working on it though 'cus that's a good nameplay