VividlyVague - Storyline has me slightly off. Not 100% sure who Esther is. I'm thinking he had some problems after his mother died, for some reason the doctor knows him although cant remember, Frank has a need to kill so Frank kills? The rhyming was improved this week. Although not exactly multi syllabic all the time, it came off quicker which made up for it.
Rakontour - The fish references are getting me. It seems like this is still a predator online piece, but you're metaphoring it with the sea? As with my other votes, my masterchef analysis is that you're mixing ingredients which don't seem to mix. Rhyming was alright but nothing pushing the boat out.
Overall, I didn't fully grasp either topic but both guys had some good lines. One was slightly better with their rhyming and the topic had a little more meat on it's bones so I vote that way.
MVGT - VV
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