MMLP - pretty nice, I like the off, non typical approach you took off the topic. The letter writing was pretty creative and I like the way you closed off the verse. You did well building the closer up with the rest of your verse and then ending it off win the closure of the letter as well. Writing wise and word usage was good and the verse didn't have any flow issues. Nice wrting, nice emotional touch.
Eth - another great verse, great approach, with great build up to a nice ending. I thought the story and the ending you had on it was done very very well. Can't say I'm a big fan of the rhyme scheme style you chose on this one, although it worked I enjoy/prefer to read a more rapid flowing verse. But overall great verse I was dying that non of that happened.
Mvgt: eth - barely tbh. Great verses by both. Sorry I was a bit rushed I gotta dip in a second. But definitely my favorite battle that I read for the week so far. Worth it for the championship battle. I thought eths story and progression to the end was a tad more interesting and enjoyable. Writing wise it was about equal in my eyes.
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