[Adonis]

Longer version in mag:

Honestly, not the best battle for me. you each did things well. Letter format with rhyme is always a plus. A concept art work of dreamscape land revolving around bat shit crazy old folks is also a plus. You both actually executed extremely well. In the end, for me, this is pure preference because I really do have a sense that this is even as can be.


v/ Battle of the foreginers, vote AMERICA


or

On my final read, the mag will say something different, but eth, the explosions were in his head, the island was his living room, the blurr of people leaving the crash site were the Dr.s and orderly's subduing him. You crafted this elaborate theatrical yet real world in the mind of a maze.

v/EtH narrowly for me. his had more meat for me to chew on


edit: pause, and no homo