"Like I'm stealing boulders I'm digging up ancient ruins." - what?
"Bloodline thick like a forest so I have to Freeman like Morgan" - the fuck?
"Love the taste of ya flesh but I don't have many friends." - oook.
"Onions kill my kind so don't call me a vegan." - lmao
"Traveled many regions and killed off twenty or thirty regions" - come on bro.
I really just can't understand trips thought process when he writes. I haven't even seen any improvement at all. He just doesn't care for critique and keeps freestyling with his thoughts. Get it together fool and take notes and read more.
J - you fucking clown. Doing just enough to win here obviously. The ending was coolin. Not much else to say really aside from this is one of your worst verses.
V. J
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