Geno:
I'm assuming you being the second verse you were trying to mesh with his level of writing. You did so well. Again another mechanically sound verse and like traps flow was on point.
As a matter of fact, i'm not sure if ive ever seen you mess flow up drastically lol.
One thing i notice about you and your writings having read your ish for a long time is they are becoming similar in style. I mean its great when you've mastered a certain way to write but i think it would be a refreshingly nice surprise to read something far from your norm. Something nobody would even expect from you. You have alot of talent and there are literally hundreds of different ways to scheme. I say experiment.
Hopefully ya'll don't take it as hate. I mean it to help.
Stay up
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