Objective:
I love the intro man
"He's in a polygamist relationship with himself"
So man angles you can just open this on as the reader.
My favorite:
With a heart of liquid nitrogen he went down to the Hell of his own self again,
The biggest fights are often fought naked and armed with tissues of healing energy.
You are your worst enemy; So you should know his tendencies,
no time to search your identitiy; locate and destroy this entity.
Your worst:
A battle to death where the last man standing reveals his destiny -
No concealed weaponry, axes raised to face this morbid monster,
sort it; conquer. It's just a phase for any self conscious hunter!
Wording and concepts felt forced like fill ins.
Dope drop man!
Mike Wrecka:
Another dope intro; your song through out is on dot wit a sick flow!
My favorite:
and the few that did seek guidance found only teachers teaching violence,
so we were led down a crooked path by believing science/
nature fights back, till your whole sector is full of doomsday preppers/
we extract and replace with waste, in landfills and dumps,
then act surprised getting hit with superstorms like every two months/
Spit more real shit man!
V/Objective
Barely
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