Frank enjoyed the tone of your piece i thought it went
Well with your owrding and images. Def like you better when
You write those epics. Feel like this incomplete? Or maybe rushed
And said fuck it post it lol i dunno but this was ok.
Ullr
I believe the flow and the progression of your lpoem really
Lent them selves to thiscweeks topic very nicely. Crisp imagery
And wording along with a strong storyline that didnt flatline or
Go south. You kept it very neat. You have a knack for that.
Vote ullr
Better ghazal in my eyes.
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