Innovator drank too much root beer and basically ditched the whole idea. Whole idea was to write a GHAZAL. Vulgar put up a sample sheet with examples and everything. Don't feel like you should be a moderator but rather just a participant. As for the Poem, again, just too much root beer.
Vulgar, it's a shame this battle cannot be broken down accordingly due to the automatic default victory by default. I thought how you Used Ellipses was creative, referring to it as a sunset, a punctuation mark, than focusing on the lip in ellipses. Was an original piece.
MVGT Vulgar
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