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Sovereign · 10-25-2015, 04:15 PM

SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: puravida vs Unfukwitable

puravida: This bar was nice. The single-syllable multis flowed well; being a longbar head, I'm not used to that, but it worked. I've seen many TMNT concepts before, but this was fresh-ish. It wasn't great, but it was simple and effective. Final Score: 12/20

Unfukwitable: I don't follow pop culture much, so I had to Google this. Since it's not an obscure reference, I won't diss you for that. The punch was solid, though a fairly obvious draw from the source material. I don't know how the word "topic" connected into the concept. The multis were a bit wordy, and the rhyming weaker than pura's. Good bar nonetheless. Final Score: 13/20

Final Thoughts: Both had decent-not-great bars here. One had the better flow, the other had a stronger concept. Holistically, one was better. No hate to either contestant.

Unfukwitable gets my vote over puravida (13 - 12)

10-25-2015, 04:15 PM	#13
Sovereign The Bat God Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: The Crystal Labyrinth Posts: 106 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: puravida vs Unfukwitable puravida: This bar was nice. The single-syllable multis flowed well; being a longbar head, I'm not used to that, but it worked. I've seen many TMNT concepts before, but this was fresh-ish. It wasn't great, but it was simple and effective. Final Score: 12/20 Unfukwitable: I don't follow pop culture much, so I had to Google this. Since it's not an obscure reference, I won't diss you for that. The punch was solid, though a fairly obvious draw from the source material. I don't know how the word "topic" connected into the concept. The multis were a bit wordy, and the rhyming weaker than pura's. Good bar nonetheless. Final Score: 13/20 Final Thoughts: Both had decent-not-great bars here. One had the better flow, the other had a stronger concept. Holistically, one was better. No hate to either contestant. Unfukwitable gets my vote over puravida (13 - 12) __________________ Deadlier than flammable nitrate mixed with samples of nightshade or tactical knifeblades and the savagest primates