I was more intrigued by the scheming tbh. I thought i was unique because tbh i really don't recall anyone else doing that. I'm the type of person who is interested in the technical ryhming mechanics of rap. As far as flow is concerned it was on point majority but i thought some of your end rhymes threw off the flow in spots.
I just may have to collab with ya at some point. If i had any real advice to give for your improvement it would be to just be careful not to fall into one particular style because experimenting with different ones is what allows such variety between drop to drop.
Good use of vocabulary...because tbh i have no idea what synapses means lol
Stay up dude.
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