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Old 10-23-2015, 01:06 PM   #11
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I think the puppet drop was better, but this was dope for what it was. I really liked that last piece Lars put, that was the kicker for me. I think more could have been done to make it more of a parody of the genre, but I did like it as it was also. This seemed pretty in sync for me, aside from one or two stanzas where the rhyming or flow wasn't as crisp, but as a whole I'm still impressed. You guys make a terrific team. I'm not sure if I've ever read a tag team piece as seamlessly put together as you guys are. Good shit guys.
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