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Old 10-23-2015, 04:09 AM   #10
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Eth, solid read. Everything pieced together so effortlessly and written with a voice only a natural can possess. Ending was dope. Only thing I feel you could've had more of were multis but even then it would prolly seem forced at times. This verse was just right, one of the best I've read all season.

Godcomplex, wasn't feeling the opening stanza. The opening few bars of the second however were dope. I felt that if you would've went back and produced something more in your first part this would've been a lot harder to decide who to vote on. Not a bad piece overall just didn't feel complete.

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