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Old 10-17-2015, 09:51 AM   #12
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this was a close battle I thought could have gone either way... I liked the mechanics in both pieces but I think nigma edged you in that department.....however I enjoyed the story aspect of your piece a lot of nigmas felt jumbled together just for thought but im not really bothered by it it just seemed packed with too many concepts at times.....but I think this was just to enhance his verse er whatever so basically that was his verse that he had against this verse by eth which had a decent concept of a verse but was just missing a couple of grammatical and wording issues that I think if he tinker tottered with he would have won this battle......but in any guess I's gots to give this battle to nigma.....good job by both writers though for doing their thing.......

vote: nigma
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