Ullr- cool piece. Your angle was good, but the ending left a lot to be desired. Your schemes and wording were a cool garnish to aid the overall piece and it was all a cohesive work. My only gripe was that it came off kinda flat, but in an autobiographical sense it was appropriate in every way, as I related deeply to this topic. Good job.
Frank- fuck. You manage to do the incredible whenever you please. The way you write compels the reader. You demand attention and commandeer emotions with the way you stage scenes and enact events. I'm jealous. Your end Rhymes were above average, but not try-hard and the pacing was done pretty well. I liked this one more than your last actual attempt. Good job.
This match was kinda lopsided. I'm not sure if I should feel bad about saying that. I dig Ullr's piece but it didn't have a soul to it the way Frank's did. Both wrote pretty well in their vein so to speak and both had almost spotless displays, but there was a clear winner in the end. MVGT Frank for the overall better piece. Good job to both of you.
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