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Old 05-03-2013, 03:39 PM   #10
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Very dope. What I say mirrors kind of what was said before.

"Its hard to choose with only but bizzare clues"

- i would reword that.

At line 10 is where this really picked up imo and got hot with the flow, the
word choice, everything. the first part was a bit slow.
really liked the last floating image at the end too. The title left me
expecting like darkness and stalagmites and shit lol
but this was cool, how its kind of a hiding place in the mind.

plus you start off with these bizarre inflictions, i was expecting more on that.

all in all a dope verse i think. a bit abstract
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