[Mr. J]

Dearg, I've come across your work a few times and enjoyed what I've seen
this time around you remind me of the more older style of writing I've come across.
you have a real bulky set up but your flow shines through each line and works
I like your verse because you push it to the limits while executing all these mechanics
towards the 3rd section you shorten your lines down and switch up nicely.
sometimes the transition is the biggest drawback to most writers as the piece progresses
regardless I felt like you grasped onto your topic and put together a dope piece
my only issue is that you may have added a lot of unnecessary filler as well
but the good tends to outweigh the bad for the most part, some nice work

I've seen witches and wizards, been kissed in a blizzard
Trained dragons to fly, lived in a land where bliss never withered
I am centuries old, yet young as a bird in a new day
Sometimes my hair is a blue/gray, or I'm wearing a toupe
Or maybe a slicked back look, biker leather from head to toe
At times I'm afraid to be afraid, and at others I let it show
In my world, light and darkness go hand in hand as a duo
I've built my own spaceship and landed on Pluto
Went behind Jupiter's back to take advantage of Juno
^^^^
You really shine through these lines and you add some dopeness all through
I remember when I first saw you around these parts you were just a itty bitty fox
now here you are all grown up and putting words together and shit, its ridiculous
regardless you have come into your own witness and I really enjoy your verse
I read it again because of the smoothness and the control of your idea choices
when you show you really do...and when you write you impress...nice work brah...

v/this is another difficult battle to vote on, I praise both writers for the amount of work they put in
Dearg brought a different style to this battle and held his own while crafted a dope topic
the overall feel of his verse felt like it was decently thought out before gracing the thread
I admit there were a few lines I could have done without but it doesnt damage his chances here
going to his opponent, the witness, I found myself enjoying everything about this verse
it gives so many perspectives that your verse could have went on forever, I like it...
this is a really close battle even with the difference in styles
ultimately I feel like Im going to have to give this to Witty...
I enjoyed Deargs verse because he went the distance, but Witty brought a more memorable verse
dope battle fellas,




v/Witty