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Old 10-13-2015, 09:41 AM   #2
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lmao i always love reading a mr. j piece because he always has hidden gems amongst the lines

Quote:
where words are soil, the plant is poisoned;
reads like it should be an ancient proverb on wisdom or some shit

"twist my body of work like a gymnast" is dope

theres not a lot more to say given this felt like a freewrite of yours and one of your shorter ones

i enjoyed it a lot

keep that pen moving!
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