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sral · 10-12-2015, 11:07 AM

17 syllables is pretty lengthy in a text line, imho

try this for size:

http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...0&postcount=41

EDIT: 'not' and 'up' dont rhyme

you suck

10-12-2015, 11:07 AM	#15
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,613 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	17 syllables is pretty lengthy in a text line, imho try this for size: http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...0&postcount=41 EDIT: 'not' and 'up' dont rhyme you suck __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season) Last edited by sral; 10-12-2015 at 11:12 AM.