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Old 10-10-2015, 06:35 AM   #9
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This was dope, as usual Witty. The wording was really smooth and you took a concept and made it work in a mid amount of lines. I'd liked to see this stretched out into a more in depth piece but you still managed to do it justice with what you've got here. Smooth read, stick around. <--- the feedback I gave you for this piece on RR. Now hit up one of my pieces! :(
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