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Sovereign · 10-09-2015, 12:42 PM

SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Nigma vs Mr. J

Nigma: The rhyming here was good. I had trouble understanding all of your metaphors, but I'm guessing that they weren't meant to be understood. The absurdity of the imagery - how it all felt connected without any clear meaning - gave me a strong "genius on LSD" vibe. Final Score: 14/20

Mr. J: I wasn't a fan of your rhyming, which was fairly short, although the flow was decent. The story here was pretty simplistic/obvious, and while well-written, it wasn't creative or interesting enough to match with your opponent's verse. Final Score: 12/20

Final Thoughts: This was a clash of the styles, but one won this with a more creative story with better execution.

Nigma gets my vote over Mr. J (14 - 12)

10-09-2015, 12:42 PM	#13
Sovereign The Bat God Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: The Crystal Labyrinth Posts: 106 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Nigma vs Mr. J Nigma: The rhyming here was good. I had trouble understanding all of your metaphors, but I'm guessing that they weren't meant to be understood. The absurdity of the imagery - how it all felt connected without any clear meaning - gave me a strong "genius on LSD" vibe. Final Score: 14/20 Mr. J: I wasn't a fan of your rhyming, which was fairly short, although the flow was decent. The story here was pretty simplistic/obvious, and while well-written, it wasn't creative or interesting enough to match with your opponent's verse. Final Score: 12/20 Final Thoughts: This was a clash of the styles, but one won this with a more creative story with better execution. Nigma gets my vote over Mr. J (14 - 12) __________________ Deadlier than flammable nitrate mixed with samples of nightshade or tactical knifeblades and the savagest primates