Quickvoting because I'm tired.
Razah - I liked the imagery here. The flow was on point. Metaphorically it was esoteric, but not ridiculously so. This was a clean, effective verse with good rhyming.
NYCSPITZ - The flow and rhyming were poor compared to your opponents. The story was simple and obvious, though told effectively. The ending too wasn't surprising. This was too obvious and hard to flow with for me to enjoy.
Razah gets my vote.
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