Razah's flow and technique was executed smoothly, really on point at times, i really admired it. The concept itself was quite basic and never really took off for me. Its a nice little piece. It felt kinda short though and read more like a soft simple poem.
NYC, interesting story, wasnt put as smoothly as your opponent, but it was a story that involved a whole lot more than Raz, you built on it. Can see youve got a good grasp of the storytelling skill. It felt like an abrupt ending mind you, quite funny i thought though.
mvgt/ NYC for the more entertaining piece
Good match up fellas!
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