ahahaa fuck man u post soooooooooooooooooo much its retarded! i know ive said this to you before but i wish you would concentrate more on quality than quantity. and this is also why u get next to no feed because theres just so much from u but i mean i get it. you just like writing and there's nothing wrong with that. at this point its coming way too easily to you. i think u need to challenge urself a bit and see what happens. are u still in the league? thats a good spot for u. anyways this piece was funny and i like it. the rhymes were good too. lol. i think as a writer you could do ALOT of things but u write so much and so fast that ur limiting urself. but thts coming from me who takes this 0% seriously either so haha take it for what it is
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My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
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