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CopyPat · 10-07-2015, 08:23 PM

hahahaha heinous!
"Especially Heinous" - Law an order DUN DUN dah dah dah dah daaaa daaaaa
lol

eh ex sup homie.
this was cool. nice to see somethin different from u. outta ur comfort zone a little so it didn't feel quite up to ur full power but still deec. i know u wrote this pretty fast so im not gonna nitpick, but just wanna say one thing. i think this had good potential but coulda been a lot more dope if the vocab was a little better. just felt a lil basic to me is all. i know the feeling though. u havent written in probly a long time so sometimes it takes a bit to get back into it. i havent been around either and found my first few posts were pretty weak, doesn't take much to get outta the zone, and prob doesn't take much to get back in either. keep posting man, and hit up the cypher too

10-07-2015, 08:23 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahahaha heinous! "Especially Heinous" - Law an order DUN DUN dah dah dah dah daaaa daaaaa lol eh ex sup homie. this was cool. nice to see somethin different from u. outta ur comfort zone a little so it didn't feel quite up to ur full power but still deec. i know u wrote this pretty fast so im not gonna nitpick, but just wanna say one thing. i think this had good potential but coulda been a lot more dope if the vocab was a little better. just felt a lil basic to me is all. i know the feeling though. u havent written in probly a long time so sometimes it takes a bit to get back into it. i havent been around either and found my first few posts were pretty weak, doesn't take much to get outta the zone, and prob doesn't take much to get back in either. keep posting man, and hit up the cypher too __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.