timeless - "This was like reading a Frank verse"...........and that's fucking AWESOME. Not many guys would have the balls to Frank Frank but you Franked Frank like only Frank would. I'd have liked to see you scheme everything, because I've come to realize that's the nonchalant style Frank uses. I feel I connected with this more than I have the past two weeks with Frank, because even though it was a topic he'd use, you still kept it very coherent which is sometimes your opponent's downfall. A huugggggge risk to diss your opponent in a topical since that's the first thing we tell newcomers to avoid, but I think for your verse it might have just paid off here.
Frank - I have to give it to you. For a dude that has won championships with his verses, you try to make us hate them sooooooooooooo much with those ugly ass fonts haha. First line, romotest...really man? I almost feel you're trying to fuck with me when you write. Like your actual goal is to trick people into not noticing this shit haha. Would you believe the last few days I've been saying to myself "Next topical verse you're finding somewhere to throw in stoic" and then you do this shit? Bad enough that I jacked stygian from Baron but now I'll be jacking stoic from you. Repeat of "oasis" annoyed me. Again, LEARN HOW TO MATCH YOUR MULTI SYLLABLES TOGETHER! Some fucking awesome flow in here, solid visuals, everything really really good and you punched through a horrid structure which is never easy to do but you Frank'd through that. If only you could stop fucking breaking up your multis with bad syllables you'd be one of the best writers around here. I'm reading this shit thinking "Man this dude paints a picture like he's inside my fucking eyes" and yet it's the only thing that keeps holding me off from loving the drops.
Overall, a close round. One took a big risk which paid off, but the other just has more in his tool belt that I really enjoyed reading.
MVGT - Frank
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