Cimm- this shut was smooth and liked the internals and the ploy of them to nevwr sleep on u. I liked the diction and direction u were heading tbr.
Lars- the vulture take was with ease and spoke with such emotion. I liked theco.olexity and the underlining of how everything unfolded.
V/ CIMM for an overall smoother outcome and clean cut across the verse tbe. Nothing negative just a personal preference.
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