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e11even · 10-01-2015, 05:41 AM

2stackz- this was a train ride composition book freestyle with graffiti tucked in the margins. I almost came at this piece to tear it down, but roses can grow out of concrete. I like that even though you admitted to not really slamming an angle, you still put this in the oven hoping it would come out tasty. I like the no-frills approach and commend you for not Shakespeareing it when you didn't necessarily feel like it. Respect. #thatlastlinetho

Eminem lp- kind of a dick move not matching lines, but I digress. The flow was pretty polished, yet simple here and it made the stupor enjoyable. This fear and loathing verse felt kinda like watching someone actually enact this and I'd be walking passed them as not to get covered in piss, but this piece was good as a piece. The subject matter was not or original or particularly a standout piece of material, but it was a better drop than its counterpart. Good job.

This felt like an easy pick, although I respect both works for what they were. MVGT MMLP for the better overall read and mechanics.

10-01-2015, 05:41 AM	#7
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	2stackz- this was a train ride composition book freestyle with graffiti tucked in the margins. I almost came at this piece to tear it down, but roses can grow out of concrete. I like that even though you admitted to not really slamming an angle, you still put this in the oven hoping it would come out tasty. I like the no-frills approach and commend you for not Shakespeareing it when you didn't necessarily feel like it. Respect. #thatlastlinetho Eminem lp- kind of a dick move not matching lines, but I digress. The flow was pretty polished, yet simple here and it made the stupor enjoyable. This fear and loathing verse felt kinda like watching someone actually enact this and I'd be walking passed them as not to get covered in piss, but this piece was good as a piece. The subject matter was not or original or particularly a standout piece of material, but it was a better drop than its counterpart. Good job. This felt like an easy pick, although I respect both works for what they were. MVGT MMLP for the better overall read and mechanics. __________________ Ahem.